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Illyrianna

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Greck
« on: January 04, 2011, 04:54:25 PM »

Basic Information

Name: Greck

Age: 2.5 Months (Hatchling)

Gender: Male

Race: Featherling (Beast)

Class: Renegade pet

Appearance: Greck is a small featherling(even for his age), standing on all fours slightly over one foot, about the size of a large cat. Opposed to the normal of his kind, he doesn’t sport flashy colors; the plumage upon his wings is brown for the most part, with a bit of white on the lowest parts and underside of those limbs. Also, the brown sports many black streaks, giving Greck a sparrow-like appearance of his avian counterpart. As for his feline features, he is covered with brown-to-orange tiger-like fur from his neck to the tip of his tail, with a white underbelly.

His face resembles what a raccoon would look like as a bird, a black mask of feathers outlining his screaming yellow feline eyes upon a brown base, with white cheeks. A pair of brown, cat-like ears makes him resemble the mischievous, masked creatures even more.

Greck is a young featherling, and that can be easily concluded by the still-present baby plumage, and a bright beak that adorns his face. The creature is small for his kind, with slightly longer neck and thinner, also elongated legs.    

Also, Greck still cannot get rid of the soft leather collar around his neck that bears a silver tag with his name, “Greck”, engraved in Shaden.

Items: N/A

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Personality:
Just like many of his kind, the featherling is easily mesmerized by shiny or sparkling items. Even food can sometimes do the trick, as the creature doesn’t get the same amount of it nowadays as he did when he was a pet. He is a curious one, which more often than not gets him into a lot of trouble.

Greck has a bit of an intriguing mental quirk. He believes bags, satchels, and nearly any fabric-enclosed spaces are perfect for hiding and sleeping in. Because of this safety-blanket behavior, he often ends up startling unsuspecting adventurers.  

As adorably cute as many believe he is, Greck is a rather selfish little creature. According to him, the humanoids exist only to serve his every whim, and if he believes he is lacking proper treatment, he will gladly leave and will never look back. Needless to say that he is a bit attention hungry and has jealousy issues if not in the spotlight.

Culture: N/A

Languages: Greck knows no languages, though he can recognize emotions behind a voice.  

Abilities: N/A

Strengths:
Greck is a fast one, his feet making him become a blur of brown as he moves. However, while moving fast, the featherling cannot spot movement easily, and sometimes miscalculates distances. Needless to say he often ends up smashing into something while running.

Weaknesses:
Scaredy-Cat – Since every single flying attempt of his has failed so far, Greck is a bit afraid of heights.
Curiosity Killed The Featherling – Greck is a curious creature, which often gets him in trouble. He also has a bit short attention span.
Flight Incapable – Greck’s wings haven’t developed fully, let alone his control over the mysterial. The creature cannot fly.

Beliefs: N/A

Weapons: Only natural ones.

History: To be written

Other Information: N/A
« Last Edit: February 04, 2011, 07:54:29 AM by Illyrianna »
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Re: Greck
« Reply #1 on: January 31, 2011, 07:56:19 AM »

Bump! Ready for review!
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Yereddia Almathea(Dhia) ~ kalus berserker ~ Theme
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Greck ~ easily distracted featherling ~
Lad’v Eveas ~ murderous nythren slave ~
Sanger de Gerscan(Joe) ~ jolly mercenary ~
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Re: Greck
« Reply #2 on: February 03, 2011, 12:23:33 AM »

-huggles Greck, and gives him food to keep him from running-

You've just got a contradiction in his size, please fix this;

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Appearance: Greck is a small featherling, standing on all fours slightly under four feet.

And from later;

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Greck has a bit of an intriguing mental quirk. He believes bags, satchels, and nearly any fabric-enclosed spaces are perfect for hiding and sleeping in.

If he's just under 4' tall, he wouldn't be fitting in any bags unless the bags are big enough to fit a Unitar in them ;) Also, that size would make him just under full grown, not exactly a small fledgling.
« Last Edit: February 03, 2011, 07:48:32 PM by Jodie »
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Re: Greck
« Reply #3 on: February 04, 2011, 08:00:25 AM »

Ohkay.

I've toned down his age, modified his height and removed what little of the flying ability he had. I've noted the lack of that in the weakness section.

I've kept the mental quirk. <3

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Yereddia Almathea(Dhia) ~ kalus berserker ~ Theme
Anette Murrnau ~ seemingly nurturing noblewoman ~
Greck ~ easily distracted featherling ~
Lad’v Eveas ~ murderous nythren slave ~
Sanger de Gerscan(Joe) ~ jolly mercenary ~
Sheetless:

Nyron Vireo (WIP Sheet)  ~ creepy criminal mastermind
Cissero Dvelnitt ~ smooth fire-shaman
Neferii Varkha ~ mischievous illusionist
Rachkin Squawkbeak ~ obsessive guard captain
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Re: Greck
« Reply #4 on: February 04, 2011, 10:12:13 AM »

Accepted~!
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